Outstanding!

Everything about this is fantastic! Your story is developing extremely well and the hooks at the end of each chapter are perfect. This would make a GREAT series for Cartoon Network. I hope you can go someplace with it, it rocks! If you don't mind my asking, how long have you been animating/Flashing?

Keep 'em coming!

Incredible!

That was so extremely well done that I'm still trying to figure out if you actually used some 3d in it or not. Great, great work!

Tripping......

This was great! You must have done WAY too much acid in to come up with this. Seriously, I thought it was exteremely well done and entertaining.